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June 23, 2021 BrotherHumble, Realm King. Eastern Divine Region, Snow Song Realm. Dear Procrastinator, I'm impressed by your diligence to finish your work. I know for a fact that it's hard for your novel vote counts to even reach 500, even so, you still continue to write a chapter of your novel tirelessly.. I respect you for that. Oh btw, you shouldn't compare yourself with other authors too much. It's distracting, can lead to poor quality work and low self-esteem. All you need to do is to keep improving and becoming better at writing novel than you were yesterday. Even if this novel turned out to be a failure, you can always keep on writing with a much better skills and experience than before as a result of your diligence. You can even write a new novel with your improved writing skills and experience. Sincerely, BrotherHumble
After Reading The Story here is my review first of all The MC morale character is worst he's in engagement ceremony thinking about his Wife's Mother's body and other stuff and he's first time was a prostitute He's stupid I would say And Some suggestions for author you can't write a good book with that short chapter like many people dropped because the chapter is 600 words or so and all of it was arrogant young master POV specially premium chapters it costs 3 coins like no free reader will use fast pass even if they use it it will not leave us a good feeling I suggest increase the word count or decrease the Release rate and Make a decent chapter with more words Iam Still Gonna Give this story 5 because I liked it
4.6 stars. That 0.2 under the mark it have when I'm writting this. Its to show im mad withoud being a d**** and give 0 start. I didn't read the book. Not even one word. BUT PLEASE try to work on synopsys. Its empty the only thing you know is : isekai (so like 99% of stuff on wb) and MC a spoiled brat ? Would you chose a book where the only thing you know is MC is a spoiled brat ? Maybe you like spoiled brat so much that its a godwin point for you author, but im not sure for the rest of the world. Anyways probably won't read. *Except if next time I click the synopsys catch my eye cough cough* have a nice day bad english maybe idk
This is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind. Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done well Hope author will keep writing. Fuck 140 word **** This is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind. Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done well Hope author will keep writing. This is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind. Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done well Hope author will keep writing. This is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind. Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done well Hope author will keep writing. This is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind. Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done well Hope author will keep writing. vThis is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind. Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done well Hope author will keep writing.