Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

I dont know if the Author understands his logical reasoning in this novel. Military school without discipline goodluck with that.

Peter's a dumb*ss for going over there lol

Damn I'm not mad if he's betray them he held long enough.

This is becoming too much of a psychopath book of hate.

So now we know that the military is comprised almost exclusively of dangerous violent psychopaths, if this military school is anything to go by.

The big issue with societal constructions like these, is that it requires a huge amount of suspension of disbelief to even believe a society like this could exist for any more than a year, if even that long.. It would crumble from within before any external sources could even try to poke it.

Bruh,if he suspicious then follow him dumbasses.. sigh really author wants to make another incident again

Not sure if you're ever going to see this but do you want help? The mass releases contain many grammar mistakes and it seems like you need someone to help. I'm willing to beta and edit your chapter if that's fine. I'll do it for free because I REALLY like this story.

I liked it so far, but I feel the quality is dropping

I've noticed more spelling & grammar mistakes on this one than the previous chapters.

Ya this method Will only cause people to leave military and join enemy after all they cant protect kids y should they serve weakness

seeing the redo of a healer inspiration now

I'm not gonna lie, personally if I was Quinn I'd start eating assholes like this dude. Hazing and bullying I get but this **** was straight up torture. Clearly this dude is crazy and needs to die.

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yh

im getting Redo Of the healer vibes here

Im done this are idiot military

what is this physcopath plot man? I mean their objective is to force students to become stronger but I think they are wasting time more in wasting other's lives. I have come here to read about a uprising vampire not to see school of physcopaths

nice chap👍