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Saint_54602yrReplied to Saint_5460"vampires."
"I'm glad you asked, Vampire lore has gone further back then you think even in Greek mythology they have tales of a vampires. The first Vampire was said to be cursed by the god Apollo, to be burnt by sunlight, then when the man tried to touch Artemis bow, she cursed the human further to be effected by silver." Layla explained, "Of course there are other reasons but this is one of the older ones. Then with the cross, Vampires have always been seen as workers of the Devil, a creature that needed to suck blood to live and of course God in the eyes of many, is a fighter of evil and the cross is a symbol of the god."- Saint_54602yrCommented
"Vampire lore goes farther back than you think. Even in Greek Mythology they have tales of vampire." Just a couple of changes and the sentence reads better already.
"I'm glad you asked, Vampire lore has gone further back then you think even in Greek mythology they have tales of a vampires. The first Vampire was said to be cursed by the god Apollo, to be burnt by sunlight, then when the man tried to touch Artemis bow, she cursed the human further to be effected by silver." Layla explained, "Of course there are other reasons but this is one of the older ones. Then with the cross, Vampires have always been seen as workers of the Devil, a creature that needed to suck blood to live and of course God in the eyes of many, is a fighter of evil and the cross is a symbol of the god." - Saint_54602yrCommented
Not sure if you're ever going to see this but do you want help? The mass releases contain many grammar mistakes and it seems like you need someone to help. I'm willing to beta and edit your chapter if that's fine. I'll do it for free because I REALLY like this story.
Ch 49 Never betray