Reviews of Spider-man reincarnation (YT: Green Door/ type "green door blue lock")
Spider-man reincarnation (YT: Green Door/ type "green door blue lock")
Bad_Ken
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As a friend of the author, I have to rate this five stars. The main thing here is the great grammar, but there's also that 'SI' feeling, in its raw state, which makes one really feel connected to the main character. All in all, I recommend this to any spider-man or marvel fan. Bad_Ken has many things planned for this!
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Well written story of a teenage MC becoming Spider-man. While the MC does have "Peter's" intellect, his IQ and EQ are not well developed at the beginning of the story, owing to him also being a teenager before transmigrating. The MC tries to use whatever information he can to build up to become the superhero he always wanted to be and exploit the weaknesses of his opponents. Overall, it's a great story from weak getting stronger as time passes. The MC needs this slow build-up to get used to his life in general as well as the turmoils of becoming a superhero. Enjoying the development thus far. A recommended read
*sniff* I am fucking happy man...finally an SI peter parker FF where peter aint no *****,,,thank you author....all I ask is make him ruthless, supervillains need to die, they cause more death....OP MC...add some romance and fluff but no shallow **** and no MJ [I dont like her,,,she a slut, sad life yes but she is ****ty].....also MC is one of the smartest people in marvel,,so make use of that brain....anyway GL
The plot itself is fine, but its the MC that completely ruins it for me. At first the MC was supposed to be your average Joe, but somehow he can kill people without remorse evil or not. The MC is also really emotional at the most random times, which really contradicts with how the MC acts other times. One time the MC cries for somehow he didnt even know while he himself has killed a lot of people already, so you'd think he would be used to it. Also the MC is one of the most cringiest MC's I have ever seen, he makes the OG spiderman (who is also a bit cringy and cheesy) look like a chad.
The MC is just too dumb. I feel like this could have been much better if the author didn't purposely make the MC act stupid just for "development". Plus the MC is really violent and brutal which I normally would be fine with but considering they were just a normal 15 year old in their last life it makes no sense.
This is an okay story but the BIGGEST problem I have with this story is homophobic slurs. I’m only on the second chapter and already MC is calling certain individuals faggots. If the use of slurs weren’t in this story it would probably be a five star story. To all people looking to read this story, don’t it’s not really worth it.
I want to continue reading but I really can't, the writing quality is good, so is the update rate, but the mc has some serious personality problems. I think he maybe suffering from mild psychosis or some other mental disease, he is quick to anger(not much of a problem on its own), he wants to be a superhero and hates bullies but his personality leans more towards a bully(or a messed up Punisher), and acts like a xianxia AYM protagonist. I have no qualms about him killing but the way it was written really makes me think he has some sort of mild mental illness.
I absolutely adore Spiderman so this was a fun read. However the dialogue is way too choppy and fake sounding. Most times a person wouldn't talk like they do in this story. The only other issue is something a lot of story's do. It was just a tad too fast paced, but maybe that's only the case in the beginning. Regardless, too many time skips get really annoying. Fun read overall.
This is a great novel ,a five star for you author ,don't stop writing ok.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
so i re read the first 6 chapters, i like it, you made it more logical of how he could build the web shooter as he has peter's iq, and the story was much easier to read. but i still have a couple of issue like how the way he act or more like how people act around him, like i'm shock how Gwen seems okay around him knowing what he just did to flash, if it was me or many others i would not help but at least feel a bit wary of him and it kinda seems like he has anger issue, or just can't seem to have self control like he lash out easily when flash taunts him, plus the killing, although its not justified but since its a fanfic i could accept it if it was handle properly, the way the mc dealt with killing criminal made me very cautious and really comfortable, like no remorse or second thought and hesitation, it did not even show him feeling guilt at all, even veteran soldier, you see when they talk about death and killing their enemies, they were shaken up, they would hesitate many time to kill, they feel guilt and remorse and these people have to do this many many times. the way mc justified his killing was just wrong like he explained that he has to kill him because he will just come back and with more power, this is not xianxia, this does not happen in real life, especially for a crook like this. also i'm pretty sure the american justice system is pretty solid it's way better than most system around the world, if this guy was caught by the police he would actually get a very heavy sentence and his not like some rich as billionaire, and even if you are if you get caught than you are still going to jail with a pretty decent sentence, i did legal back in school and i should know. but i like that you already listen to your readers and made some changes and i guess you can sort of make him go through a character growth, have him realized his action and give him consequences, like if i know a friend was killing criminals because he think its better as the police wont do much, i would still be terrified of them, i would think he's a psychopath no matter his intention be it good or bad. you could probably have kill but it has to be pretty convincing and it should be like supervillians like the green goblin, the man is just messed up, and other like the hand or the kingpin, but killing the kingpin wont make any difference and might make it worst, like it or nit criminals like the king keeps order and although he kills and does many illegal things he still does thing for the good of the city and does not allow his crooks to create chaos everywhere, you should know that there's many villains that don't actually deserve death they become like that as they were force to. mc should kill criminals like the joker, this is probably the most likely to be a justified killing a person, this guy is just the next level of crazy.