Reviews of Campus's Belle

Can't give it a higher review without reading more, unfortunately. However, the potential in the story is pretty high. Prose flows naturally and grammar only needs minor adjustments. The way the dialogue flows could use a bit of rethinking IMO. Instead of putting the action before the quotations, perhaps put it after the actual dialogue so that you can avoid using too much colons. Again, this is first impressions. Keep on writing, the only way available is up. 👍

Hi to the author, I was wondering if theres any way to contact you? I saw that you used to have a discord and I would love an invite to the server. My roommates and I recently anonymously received in the mail a printed copy of your story Campus' Belle when we did not order it. We wanted to know if you were aware that your story was being printed? We read the story and really liked it and found your online version of it to try and reach out to you. We just thought we would let you know that a printed version of your story exists in the world that we now treasure and have hung on our wall. Im not sure who sent it or where it came from, but a copy of your work now is on display in our apartment in the USA. Have a good day! You can message me on discord: katieclems#4719

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