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Over all, it’s good. You should get an editor, there is quite a lot of grammar in each chapter, I’d say that you should say what the characters look like and put more detail into the rooms and world and stuff. It’s pretty good, you just need more detail, and you should reread the chapter before you publish the chapters each time because I saw a lot of grammar.
it's a pity the author not update the stories again 😭😭😭😭😭 Thanks a LOT to the author for this novel. If your age is 18+ then want p*rn stories only & don't want to confuse with too much plot, then I'll really recommend for you to read this. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Loving this book..over and over again..Idont know why..but it feels good when ur reading it..another thing is..the author will give ur fantasies..what ever I request..he will make it in a whole new perspective and its soo good...u never think that it can happen in that way..hope u love it..as the way I do.