RubyDreams
Finally, something that isn't reincarnation or an isekai. Writing has minimal grammatical mistakes and the story is moving jlong quite nicely. The Prologue however starts of a bit odd, might want to change your starting sentence for something with more impact? Nevertheless, this shows promise. More character interactions can also improve the story. Keep on keeping on 👍
Voy hasta el capítulo 2. Hasta el momento tiene un desarrollo decente de historia. Los personajes están definidos hasta cierto punto. La protagonista sabe lo que quiere y no parece sufrir secuelas **icológicas lo suficientemente preocupantes para llegar a una línea de venganza retorcida o hacer estrategias complicadas.
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