Comments of chapter undefined of The Spider Queen
The Spider Queen
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It pains me to say it but I must say I did not like this chapter. I am reading this for the story and other than the short part of Sophie somewhat going against the voice in her head (?) I didn't really feel like this chapter contained any relevant details. I am not strictly against the idea of R-18 scenes in novels but in this particular case it felt a bit out of place. My problem with this chapter is probably that it contains almost only *** and nothing else. I would have probably liked it better if there was more content in the beginning of the chapter leading into the situation. Of course this is only my personal opinion and everyone is free to disagree with me. And of course this is only one chapter and doesn't impact my opinion of the whole novel. Sorry for expressing my negative opinion here and possibly dampening the mood but I had it on my mind and I felt like I had to say something.
thanks fore the chapter you made tbe right balance if 18+ and and a novel cuase other novels of female leads or romance have extreme amount of lewd ness well anyway i dont know how to explain this but other 18+ novels that i noticed where uhhh extreme of the lewdness and this was an ok balance in the chapter... uhhhhhh... well thats all have a nice day and keep up the good work if possible
