lets goooo new chapter

rip demon kingdoom

you know your relly managed to outdo yourself here i uild feel there sadness in the writing i cuild feel the emotions the story wanted to convey great work

and here you can you see a shocked demon in its natrual habitat

is this turning in to a mostly sexual jokes? or how do i describe this uuhhhh well **** it the novel is getting a bit repetative with all the sexual comments or sentecnes in the novel and i dont persolanly like this change but what the hell who ami to question your writing i can just stop reading it but i just felt i need to state my opinion of the matter

thanks fore the chapter you made tbe right balance if 18+ and and a novel cuase other novels of female leads or romance have extreme amount of lewd ness well anyway i dont know how to explain this but other 18+ novels that i noticed where uhhh extreme of the lewdness and this was an ok balance in the chapter... uhhhhhh... well thats all have a nice day and keep up the good work if possible

its perfect itsent to much or to little