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Reviews of Kingdom Of Hearts

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Kingdom Of Hearts

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Primate
PrimateLv4Primate

A very good book to read. Excellent use of the English grammar. The characters are fun read too, especislly May. The worldbuilding is well written and the story is progressing nicely. Nice work. Please keep it up.

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Blackturtle
BlackturtleLv3Blackturtle

Hey there. Here. This is one lovely but yet unpredictable novel. Moonlight. I Love your imaginations yeah. And May.... Can I keep her? I promise to handle all her troubles😅. On the contrary hope your doing safe and spending time with your loved ones during this historic period. Remember well get thru all this :) stay safe. 👍

Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOLv7Gourmet_DAO

Superbly written text block. A very interesting plot of the novel. The intrigue does not leave when reading each chapter. The end of each chapter is unpredictable. Well-written everyday scenes from the life of the characters. I have read only a few chapters so far, but I really liked the work. I included it in my library! Author, bravo, good job! Just one wish, author, do not forget to update the chapters!

ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingLv14ThePotatoKing

Lovely book and interesting characters. The interaction between the ML and FL is very cute and heartwarming. It is an extremely interesting story and the magicmakers seem extremely mysterious. Its seem like an interesting plot and i like how the story so far.

TheMystic
TheMysticLv3TheMystic

The story is good, it has potential! I can only say one thing, Details ! Details! Details! If you want to go even further; add more details, set the mood of the story, give the reader a special feeling when he reads it. Great stories are those that invoke special feelings in the heart wether amusement or sorrow. Explain some things as the story teller to fix any confusions that might rise. Good Luck!

bobozanga
bobozangaLv2bobozanga

I like your story's plot and the flow of the story in general :D some grammar issues but I don't think it bothers me too much. keep writing <3 adding to the library

Dan_Ryder
Dan_RyderLv3Dan_Ryder

The first chapter was amazing and instantly drew me in. Very good job! There were grammatical errors and text blocks here and there but this was a satisfying read.

Sunny_Skies
Sunny_SkiesAuthorSunny_Skies

Hello everyone! Author here! I just wanted to say: 1. Thank you to everyone who is cooperating with my writing. Yes I know it’s choppy but this is my first book so just be patient. 2. Please vote with power stones so that the book can move higher in ranking and more people will see it. 3. I encourage you guys to write chapter AND/OR paragraph comments so that I know that you are actually active and interactive with the storyline. 4. If you like my book, add it to your collection! I will be doing at least 5 books in this series. (The series with be called “Nightly Creatures of Enchansica” or something like that. Just be patient😁) Again, thank you for reading my book and I look forward to seeing yalls comments! ✨😌😁