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Second Chance: Raising A Yandere Demon Lord

ShinSungmi

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ShinSungmi
ShinSungmiAuthorShinSungmi

Hello! This is the author shamelessly rating her book 5 star 🥰🥰! This is the first time I am writing this type of story. It has a historical setting— something I have never done before— and cruel main characters. The female lead, Odette, is someone who is a sadist and prefers amusing things. She was given a second chance after being killed by the male lead, Adrian. In this life of hers, she desired to raise Adrian and see his potentials since she believes that he is amusing. In her last life, Adrian killed of her entire family for revenge— at least that is what she thinks. Nonetheless, she doesn't hold a grudge at him for that because according to her, it was the strongest that prevails, plus they have deserved that. I can't exactly say what is to be expected, but there will be definitely be a lot of murders, and if you are a soft hearted person, I would not exactly suggest that. The male lead will be on the possessive side because why not? I have not written a male lead that is exactly that possessive, so that's why I want to give it a try. The female lead is not a good person. She was someone who was directly and indirectly involved with torturing the male lead. But she carries her own pain. Remember that the female lead is a cruel person, and as for the male lead, you will see 😄 That's all!

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Tea_Tae
Tea_TaeLv13Tea_Tae

Daaaamn I'm hooked. Odette is definitely a fresh gun yandere FL and I'm worried about the poor ML. He has no idea what he's gonna get into 😂😂😂 You've really improved a lot! The description was excellent and the world building is fun to read. Need more 😁

NothingToSee
NothingToSeeLv13NothingToSee

I think this novel has a really good opportunity to get to it's highest point because a lot of the time people like female leads who are cold blooded and this novel FL is cold blooded. And I wish the author the best for the contest

Kamlyn
KamlynLv14Kamlyn

It's a really interesting story. Only first chapter has been out but the it is well written. I am curious how will the story progress.♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️💕💕

Lynzie_Lee
Lynzie_LeeLv2Lynzie_Lee

Really interesting so far. I'm not exactly sure where it's headed but I like that. It's no fun if you can see where everything is going. 👍👍

coffeemugssshot
coffeemugssshotLv11coffeemugssshot

The story started interestingly. I love how strong the FL is. I love FL that has cold and detached characters. I gave 3 stars in writing quality because of some misplaced punctuations, some repetitive words, and phrases. I am also a little bit annoyed with too much usage of the word 'vocalized'. **Although there is a lot to criticize on my writing as well** I know the author tried his/her best to deliver good story. I am excited about how this story will go in the future.

juniey01
juniey01Lv12juniey01

This is a promising story i tell you. The fl is such a babe n i like her so much!!!!!! It is truly a great story for those who want non cliche story (for me). The story development is good so far but i hope that author can make the chapter longer❤️❤️❤️

Kinoko
KinokoLv3Kinoko

Finally, not an extremely helpless, stupid, too hardheaded FL. So new and interesting that the FL is a ruthless and cold blooded person ❤️❤️

acurtebean
acurtebeanLv11acurtebean

Never seen a FL like her, so far I really like the characters and how the plot is developing. I hope you won't ever consider dropping the novel because you're doing a great job.

Bellsin
BellsinLv4Bellsin

This is truly a great story. The novel with a well written and different from others. Keep up the good work.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Good luck with the contest.

Lady_Sangeriu
Lady_SangeriuLv14Lady_Sangeriu

Since it just started I can't accurately rate this book, but with the few chapters that I've read I can tell that it shows promise. I look forward to reading it and will check on it periodically for updates. Good luck author

Xye
XyeLv13Xye

I actually like the plot a lot. I'm fond of this kind of plot 😅. It has a lot of potential to be on its highest rating but the updating is so slow. But if only the updating is as good as others, ill be giving this a perfect score. 😘

Wuxia_6666
Wuxia_6666Lv2Wuxia_6666

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Moony_01
Moony_01Lv5Moony_01

Though I didn’t know what to expect from this originally, this book is surprisingly good, from the crash of contradictory feelings to the rainbow of characters who vary in their cruelty. Though each character has his or her own story’s worth, each character seems vividly portrayed, it does not exceed or overshadow the main character. I know I often get annoyed with side stories and such or an overly detailed account of a side character’s lives, this book does not have that. Instead, the reader’s are given an insight that is relevant to the plot with intriguing underlying implications. I might add that the main character is without a doubt cruel. But realistically, why would a character have such a sickening nature? She does not seem to regret it either but who knows? For those interested, I highly recommend. The author did an amazing job. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

Lazkie
LazkieLv10Lazkie

Great work! 😍 Characters' personalities and attitudes are clearly displayed. Though it is quite dark but that just gives us a thrill and I'm surprised that it can be balanced with fluffiness 🤩. Keep up the great work

RenuKakkar
RenuKakkarLv5RenuKakkar

I have only read 9 chapters out of the 20 chapters written and have found them interesting. The world background is well described and the story is developing nicely.The writing quality and stability of updates is constant. Keep it up. All the best.

Jin_Daoran
Jin_DaoranLv10Jin_Daoran

Odette Albinius, the primary character, is charismatic and interesting. Primarily, I believe, because of her strong will and unpretentious demeanor. Her self-awareness and her unashamed logic that caters to only her desires and interests, damn other people and what they think is morality, is somehow an attractive quality. This is not the first female character I've read on Webnovel with such a dark background, but it's the first with an unashamedly battle-maniacal fun-loving sociopathy. There are more of the type in Japanese anime and manga though. Despite this, I feel this character to be refreshing. Possibly I've spent too much time on Webnovel? haha A blood-lusting sociopathic lady suddenly turned into a child again...the background the author gives is not that original but there is a verve to it. The insight this reversal of time gives the reader, on how a person with such demonic values might have been created by the circumstances and people around her, is definitely interesting. The grammatic mistakes are minor, though sometimes the names of the characters are turned around. Still, the author's writing has an energy to it that has you going from one chapter to the next. I'd say give it a chance. I certainly have not regretted coming across this story.

Kajnagyip
KajnagyipLv4Kajnagyip

I just wanted to say the old cover was better The story is really good, not the fastest upgrades but not bad either(I’m being honest, but this review is only for me to complain about the cover change).

bluering2
bluering2Lv2bluering2

I curious if Adrian will run away and kidnap her? Or will she go with him willing? Will there be a time skip? I just want to know already cause it's really good.

bluering2
bluering2Lv2bluering2

I am loving this story. The anticipation for Adrian to transform into a yandere is killing me. I just want to see him crazy possessive over FL. How will FL react to that development is what I'm looking forward to too!