Reviews of Black knight(Black clover fan fic) ( dropped)

-how the hell he got strong to be on par with magic knight captain at the age of 12 isnt his power levelling is too much -i dont even know if he use the yamato correctly because in the past chapter i read i didnt see him cut space -the story progress with the harems is too fast he is still a kid and he already has like 4 harem -i dont even know what kind of sword arts he is praticing or how good is he on it -im fine with dmc weapon but i dont even know what main weapon and sub weap is he gonna use is it the yamato,rebellion, or the two demon sword that original asta use

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Your story is awesome and nice. But I think you should make a chapter where all the powers and abilities of the MC are noted. I hope that you keep working hard like this and your work is improving day by day. Don't listen to haters and please continue this story.

Writing quality: I mean I’ve seen worse but still this person needs a lot of practice and needs to learn more about basic human interactions for instance how humans would interact with each other in the scenario that this story is based on. Your grammar is also pretty bad I recommend you use something like Grammarly. And if you don’t know how to spell her name look it up like use F A N D O M or just G O O G L E either one works. Stability of updating: pretty good so far  Story development: I mean I like where the story is going but you did say that he wouldn’t be OP he is beyond OP I mean he has too many abilities not only that but most of his abilities are way over powered  character design: character design is actually pretty good just going off of the main character in my opinion but like I said your basic human interaction and reactions are not good at all World background: I mean it’s a fanfiction I don’t have much to say about that but I do like where it’s going 

-the main character is getting a bunch of things way to fast -DETAILS -establish who the **** the mc is BRUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Very cool 10/10 ;) make sure to never drop novel is extremly good ................... ........................................................................

its a good novel .

I like very much the changes you made, keep writing, thanks for your hard working, hope you can continue to update with new chapter, take care and thanks bye

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Great work bro.... Keep up the hard work...........................,..............................................................................................................................,,...,...........

If you have a thing for a arrogant easy provoke mc that it is for you. I just watch 29 chapter and I wish I was dead I seriously hate the mc personality and can't the author do better on the dialogue. The romance kinda force it together I make this as I drop the series But I must say great update

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more and thanks 👍.

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i Liked the story so far and good plot do continue the story. Don't drop it is interesting. -----------------------------Continue -----------------