Review Detail of EphemeralKaos in Black knight(Black clover fan fic) ( dropped)

Writing quality: I mean I’ve seen worse but still this person needs a lot of practice and needs to learn more about basic human interactions for instance how humans would interact with each other in the scenario that this story is based on. Your grammar is also pretty bad I recommend you use something like Grammarly. And if you don’t know how to spell her name look it up like use F A N D O M or just G O O G L E either one works. Stability of updating: pretty good so far  Story development: I mean I like where the story is going but you did say that he wouldn’t be OP he is beyond OP I mean he has too many abilities not only that but most of his abilities are way over powered  character design: character design is actually pretty good just going off of the main character in my opinion but like I said your basic human interaction and reactions are not good at all World background: I mean it’s a fanfiction I don’t have much to say about that but I do like where it’s going