Reviews of Trials of Ortus (A DxD fanfic) [Hiatus]

I like that the main heroine is Sona ,I was getting tired of Rias being the bitchy heroine. It would be great if he creates a public organization like a guild. It would be great if he doesn't control the chaos brigade so there will be some plots left for the "Oppai Dragon" so reconsider my review. I also like his trials. WILL RATE FIVE 🌟STARS TO SUPPORT AUTHOR , RATE HIM FIVE STARS OR VOTE HIM TO KEEP THIS GOING, I DON'T WANT THIS NOVEL TO BE DROPPED😥😭😭😭😭😥😥 [THIS IS A MASTERPIECE]. 👉👌+💑=👪

So aside from stability of update. I give five stars to everything else. Still, I will officially give 5 stars because I want to support him and offset some of the stupid reviews. This author here is a good friend of mine and I like to think that I participated a little in creating this story. Firstly for all those who complain about the mc being a servant. They are childish stupid and many other kinds of insult I won't use. What's bad about having a mc who WAS a servant? He didn't even stay one for more than 5 chapters. The author simply used it as a way to make a connection between the mc and the sitri house as such a direct connection with the main plot of the story. Stupid reviews who only review after reading less than 5 chapters. Secondly, the author isn't one who only thinks with his dick. Of course, there will be a harem. But it won't be one full of tens of girls. Each girl will have a reason to fall for the mc and they won't be numerous. Five to six I think. Finally, the author didn't simply watch the anime he also read the light novel who have more than 25 volumes + side stories + a prequel + a sequel. It's voluminous. Let's hope the author will write a great story.

Well done I will have stop reading if you made him servant for long we ant an mc who isn't controlled by any one .😁.

1st.. and so far it nice read,,, soo go update some more,, thanks,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

I enjoy how different it is from other DxD fanfics and how the main difference is that Trials has Sona as the main heroine in this harem fanfic instead of the usual Rias making it refreshing. I like the character designs but I kinda wish there was a description of the main character as I try to imagine the scene and the characters of the fanfic and novel when I'm reading. One other gripe I have is that I don't know where in the DxD timeline this takes place when you compare it to the original. Besides those two gripes I genuinely enjoy this fanfic and I hope Revengelord continues to write both of his fanfics until completion.

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Very good book, I like the Ortus system, writing quality Is top notch, MC isnt a beta but also dosent think with his dick. .........................................

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I thank the lord author is back updating the story. The story is just great and I love it. Hate Rias because she’s just so stubborn and ignorant. I’m glad the FL is someone else. Anyways, overall is great and I look forward to more is all I can say.

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if you stay consistent with the novel update sooner or later it will continue to rise in rank, keep up the spirit, friends, there are still many people waiting for the novel update faster, thank you

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