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πNo matter what, I will still beat you. Anyway. I see this guy as a Rival of mine since we currently write fanfic on the same topic. MHA. As a rival I can't obviously say bad things about this story since it would mean that mine is also badπ. More seriously. I really like this story. He used Midoriya as the base and diverged greatly from the original plot. You could say that it's his own world. His new midoriya is a little crazy and more anti-hero than Hero. Good luck friend and may you never be able to win against meππ
Okay, so I decided to make my story better. This is a better version, with better grammar and overall better word structure there is also more information overall which I missed in the previous one or didn't want to include at all. The cover was handdrawn by myself so I would be glad if you liked it. Story starts slow as I need to establish the foundation for future relationships. If you want to know the details about the story, join my discord which is in the description of the story. Have a nice day.
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Is good so far just that there are points that Gamer Mind would have acted but it didnβt work I understand that you want your MC show emotions there and there but even the original Gamer showed emotions but the strong ones get a peg down if they can harm the user... Anyway everything that you are showing something donβt add up and is the brother of Itsuka Kendo, Leo if you add Luck in the negatives will not give you some sort of unavoidable skill actually someone made a joke trying to make a Berserk βGutsβ gamer and he have around 500 luck but a lot of bad thing happen to him so he found out that luck is like a pendulum it can be bad or good but is still luck you can take notes about that π€
I looked for ajin fanfics in this site, i came out empty. I looked for gamer fanfics in this site, i came out with just 3 books, this one is not one of them. I looked for my hero academia fanfics in this site, i got results, but this book is not one of them. I have not read it yet, but i'm exited. And for the love of god, webnovel, FIX YOUR DA*M SEARCH FUNCTION!!!
Well, the first review of the book rewrote by Aki, like I said previously I love this book, one of my favorite. If you want an original ff of bnh, you came to the good place. The author (Aki) is listening to all people even little shits who are saying nonsense. The character of Izuku is well developed, we can clearly see his doubts and how he evolve. The pace is a little slow but it is good βcause he isnβt rushing the relationships between Izuku and his girls. (It is harem yes). He is always trying to be better and fix his mistakes. The author and the book are great.