AverageWannaBe
I did not see the whole manga, but if the part where mikasa-tan's heart breaks, I stopped seeing him, I do not like the character of "Eren", worse with his way of behaving. ----------------------- Mikasa-chan, annie and Krista, are good candidates for the harem, since they all have sad stories or heavy burdens. ------------------------------------------------------ I'm from the yuri hehehehe sect.
19 chapters and the story barely reaches canon. Romance is with other people just coincidentally named mikasa, christa, and anny. It’s disappointing and makes no sense mc is so op to the point he could and has distroy a universe but, he can’t think ahead or move fast when it is needed. At first U either out right quit or don’t take it seriously. Mc is op to a crazy level so u can forget plot other the Romance but, thats wrong. No matter your approach on the story it will always be trash. Stupid story all around and besides its droped. Author seems to be Young likely in high school so don’t expect much.
one of the most common annoyance in fanfictions you made him unnecessarily op at first then you force him to be so fu*&* weak he can destroy the the entire universe but he can only arrive at the last minute ... 😐 why? hmm? WHYYYYYY 😩 i am starting to think you guys are doing that for harem purposes for the love of god i can't see the how is that related but it's strangely do 5/5 for your self-esteem 😅
Although long, but still a good start. It can be seen that the author worked on the story of the main character, which is good. The author began, joking in places, at first it was funny. But gradually, these author's jokes, which were all just like the author's thoughts, began to affect the entire book. For me personally, this is a strange decision and somewhat spoils the impression of the book. As a fan fiction for the evening, it looks good. The story of the main character and the initial chapters when he got into the world of AoT led me astray. I began to believe that I had finally found a serious fanfiction where the author does not write for the sake of freaking stones and he is not a sloth. Well, you understand, the sudden appearance of comedy has cooled my ardor for fan fiction and most likely, I will not return here again. But still, I would like to thank the author for his work. Thank you for respecting your readers and not behaving like some individuals who consider themselves the navel of the earth (GhostyZ) and give out 500 characters as a chapter. Thanks! For the long chapters, Respect, although I am a little disappointed, but in general I was satisfied with what I read. Bye and good luck to everyone
Je n'ai pas vu tout le manga, mais si la partie où le cœur de mikasa-tan se brise, j'ai arrêté de le voir, je n'aime pas le personnage de "Eren", pire avec sa façon de se comporter. ----------------------- Mikasa-chan, annie et Krista, sont de bons candidats pour le harem, car ils ont tous des histoires tristes ou de lourdes charges.
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