Avatinius
The grammar is readable but includes many many mistakes here and there through out the story(if I can even call this a story) only a couple of thousands of word into the fanfic, the author thought it was a good idea to just wipe out the asgardians, no character development no world building no nothing, just because they damaged his clothes a tiny bit. The Mc is now locked into a battle with pretty much all the main characters in the marvel cinematics. I’m baffled at how quickly this story is progressing and doubt that it would go over 30 chapters at this point.
OP MC...selfish..does whatever he wants..dope..interested....keep MC stupid OP...I physically he already is in the top [right?]...make MC travel to anime or wuxia worlds...preferably a few years before cannon..add some romance and fluff but pls build it...keep MC smart and strong..not some perverted idiot.......well.....goodluck.... **: maybe make MC free hela and travel with her...not black widow cause she is overdone
First the story isn't great and the character is unhinged without any clear reason or explanation as to why. Also the premise behind that character is wrong. It is not a General, Generals are in command of an army for a nationstate or mercantile group or organisation. The MC is simply an emobaby edgelord SUPREME
This is great!! I think is the first time I find a fanfic that has a mc who is merciless but also has a personality (likes girls and strength does not count) I like that he is grounded in reality, for instance when he met his faited person, but is not praise for his intellect by every person he meets after like 5 seconds. For some reason I find it quite relaxing to red. Honestly a have read so many stupid stories due to boredom that now I have become numb to all the nonsense. This is God send. It is a hidden gem💎 that undoubtedly deserves more attention.