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Reviews of The Maniacal General with his Crazy System

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The Maniacal General with his Crazy System

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Gutterstomp
GutterstompLv13Gutterstomp

The grammar is readable but includes many many mistakes here and there through out the story(if I can even call this a story) only a couple of thousands of word into the fanfic, the author thought it was a good idea to just wipe out the asgardians, no character development no world building no nothing, just because they damaged his clothes a tiny bit. The Mc is now locked into a battle with pretty much all the main characters in the marvel cinematics. I’m baffled at how quickly this story is progressing and doubt that it would go over 30 chapters at this point.

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

OP MC...selfish..does whatever he wants..dope..interested....keep MC stupid OP...I physically he already is in the top [right?]...make MC travel to anime or wuxia worlds...preferably a few years before cannon..add some romance and fluff but pls build it...keep MC smart and strong..not some perverted idiot.......well.....goodluck.... **: maybe make MC free hela and travel with her...not black widow cause she is overdone

AverageWannaBe
AverageWannaBeLv4AverageWannaBe

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wisdomkeeper
wisdomkeeperLv14wisdomkeeper

This is good Novel, MC with system but He can Accept or Decline Quest so... he is not a Slave of system. 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Sokanas
SokanasLv13Sokanas

First the story isn't great and the character is unhinged without any clear reason or explanation as to why. Also the premise behind that character is wrong. It is not a General, Generals are in command of an army for a nationstate or mercantile group or organisation. The MC is simply an emobaby edgelord SUPREME

Dumbgum
DumbgumLv4Dumbgum

Hahahahahahaha The first maniac boring MC. I rather prefer beta mc than this mc. ........................................................

creatorGod
creatorGodLv5creatorGod

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Devil547
Devil547Lv12Devil547

It's understandable that the guy is crazy with the title of the webnovel, but madness without a reason is silly. Not my cup of tea....................

Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv13Everything_Forever

Why add romance to a perfectly good novel that would of been fine without it!? I feel like the author just wanted some sex scenes because that will rack and more people who fap to reading this and imagining the scenes. Romance is trash and so is this novel.

silviawtip
silviawtipLv3silviawtip

This is great!! I think is the first time I find a fanfic that has a mc who is merciless but also has a personality (likes girls and strength does not count) I like that he is grounded in reality, for instance when he met his faited person, but is not praise for his intellect by every person he meets after like 5 seconds. For some reason I find it quite relaxing to red. Honestly a have read so many stupid stories due to boredom that now I have become numb to all the nonsense. This is God send. It is a hidden gem💎 that undoubtedly deserves more attention.

Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6Hentai_Senchou

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TheDemiurge
TheDemiurgeLv4TheDemiurge

A great Fanfic which i really love to read. It would be better if the author can fix updating rate of the novel. And add some new twist and turns

allucard1222
allucard1222Lv4allucard1222

Very good plz i beg dont ever drop

4bidienkingdom
4bidienkingdomLv64bidienkingdom

great story and thank you for novel . .

Shadow_XYZ
Shadow_XYZLv4Shadow_XYZ

Noob author blah blah blah .................................................................................................................................................

KreiosDeimos
KreiosDeimosLv12KreiosDeimos

10/10 Would read again. (or 5/5 I guess...) .........................................................................................

kingofgucci
kingofgucciLv4kingofgucci

I really like. You have to get over the first few chapters tho and then it starts to get good.I really like. You have to get over the first few chapters tho and then it starts to get good.I really like. You have to get over the first few chapters tho and then it starts to get good.

TheZenith
TheZenithLv4TheZenith

really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good really good

Bogg_Dann
Bogg_DannLv4Bogg_Dann

Great fanfic, keep it up! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Daoist280834
Daoist280834Lv2Daoist280834

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