Review Detail of Gutterstomp in The Maniacal General with his Crazy System

The grammar is readable but includes many many mistakes here and there through out the story(if I can even call this a story) only a couple of thousands of word into the fanfic, the author thought it was a good idea to just wipe out the asgardians, no character development no world building no nothing, just because they damaged his clothes a tiny bit. The Mc is now locked into a battle with pretty much all the main characters in the marvel cinematics. I’m baffled at how quickly this story is progressing and doubt that it would go over 30 chapters at this point.