Carciphones_02
This story is ver interesting, the first time I read this story in my wattpad account, holy **** I like the story, well the story is about a 17 yeras old girl died while saving a pregnant woman, but sad to say that when she almost reach her ending she found out that the women she saved is not pregnant well she cursed out and then there she reincarnated inside a otome game as a villian....
Now this one's good! I already read the first five chapters and I liked it. I just noticed that there are few little errors, but it's just the placement of the past and present tenses, and it's not that bad. I mean, I make mistakes on that too hehehe. And I say, I indeed like the story, it's really interesting. I love how natural and realistic it is written even though it is a fantasy. While reading it, I noticed that it has funny scenes also which I actually enjoyed. This is fun to read. Keep up the good work author!Now, I'm just waiting for updatesđ.