https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/dont-be-an-impel-down-er-one-piece-si.386260/
this is one of my favorites now i just can't wait for more. i hope the auther won't stop writing this story i hate when the make a good story and give up halfway through or at the beginning.
Are you going to continue this story or improbe it , or are you just stealing it? -------------------------------------------------------------------
I like this but I hate it. It made the one piece world too dark. I applaud you for the story though. The way the character lost his maturity and humanity year by year is intresting. You mature as you age but the character became childish. I wanted to finish it but I can't. My psyche can't take it. I have added it to my library and will hopefully read it again when my mind isn't full of dopamine. But I hate that you made the MC an si. He could've been an OC because ultimately that is what he became