Reviews of Journey In Harry Potter World

1) Your MC is super OP. Knowledge about his past life already cheat, but you're still adding more cheats: - Soul Phoenix from owl (it's not pokemon to evolve like that) - Winchester knowledge ( where it came from, if he's normal muggleborn) - OP Artifact Hat - oh, and don't forget this "Magic CORE" **** Anything of this OP by itself, but together... You'll just drop this fan-fic soon, because: 1) it's boring as hell 2) to OP, if he'll not kill Volandemort with all his powers in 3-4 years that's will be really weird. Right now your fun-fic looks like "Cheat Engine".

fleur delacur, gabrielle delacur, astoria, dapne, hermanioni = harem. ..............................................................................................................................................................................

Excellent concept 👌.well written till now not disturbing the main story plot .I hope Author continue s without dropping in middle like other novels.All the best

Amzing harry potter fanfic with OC as the main character. The sbest thing abput this fanfic is the new types of magic explored and I'm hoping that the author will explore the potter world the same.

I liked the story and its characters, especially Bella and the hat. Your writing needs a bit of work because sometimes I get lost while reading or I dont know what you're trying to say. Overall, I love this novel and I hope you continue writing more chapters!!

I will give you full score coz I hope you will update more in the future. And PLS NO HAREM!!!!!!!!!! LIKE SERIOUSLY!! but overall I love the story so far. Keep going I hope unlike most fanfics with potential you will continue to update periodicly and go beyond at least 80 chapters coz its annoying when this good fanfics stop and are dropped halfway.

Author: This is my first novel, obviously I'm rating it 5 stars. I hope you like this novel and enjoy it. I need reviews and some suggestions.

Great Harry Potter Fan-Fic , OC MC a Muggle born interesting to see the outcome of it.Enjoying reading the OPness or powerup's in the novel.

Great story, hope you could do it well... Don't worry, it may not look like a lot of guy and girls reading your fiction in the comment section, but it's not.. There's thousand of people reading it, but they just didn't comment.. So, don't feel down... You still have a lot of fans waiting for new chapter!!!

SO far as i can see great Harry Potter Fan-Fic. Not enough stability of updates. Not enough of view of Muggleborn in this world and to easy for MC. No real challenges for MC. I can understand that challenges will start will main plot Harry Potter plot but still would be good to read about some in 1-2 year of Hogwarts.

While the story is pretty good, the Grammer is awful. It feels like it written with 8 year olds English skills. It also wrongly overuses the most annoying word that every time I see it used as a descriptor makes me want to reach through the computer and smack the author. The word "like".

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At chapter 4. I have several issues with this over. 7 yrs old MC regains past live memories and suddenly he can perform several types of magic??? Like how?? He was not a wizard in past life. Envelope if he know he has magic, how does he know the usage of it and to do transfiguration, illusion and other types suddenly is too forced. Can see from these 4 chapter that this novel is garbage.

The writing starts off at a really bad quality, like hard to read quality. I feel nothing really pulling me into the story, not feeling any drive coming through the writing. Just a badly planned plot that seems very on the spot.

good story and recommend to read it tho all harry potter fanfic fans it is something different from all the other stories i have already read and hope for more stories along those lines

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I really really really like this fanfic so I pls continue. And I will seriously not accept any form of harem what so ever. SERIOUSLY NO HAREM!!! Other than that all is good.

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