ZGearCecil
This novel is bland. I don't like any of the characters personalities present at all. The way people are reacting and communicating is disappointing as well. I was intrigued at the start of the novel since it's somewhat similar to Overlord. Once they reached the tavern that's when I started disliking the story. You could have done some world building, develop their personalities,or push us to in the direction that this is a real world and not some game. From what I seen is a novel that makes no sense. The emotions and the reactions of the MC feel forced and cringy. Once they started the dungeon the story just turned to hell due to the revive function and vampires. Sorry but If your just going to make the MC some powerhouse with slaves and have a revive function then story is not going to go far unless you want to make a average novel that's filled with readers that praise your novel for having an OP character with a harem. If you want to improve as an author you need to compare the emotions and world building of your work with great novels that are similar to the genre of yours.
Loving what you did with this story so far, even brought Jack along. You're like Gene Roddenberry who used Dylan Hunt over and over again. So Cute. The characters are likable, unique, and varied in racial class. An Undead, A Moon Elf, a High Human and a Seraphim. What else could you possibly ask for!? Keep it up Author-sama! You have our support!
Well-written and enjoyable, this story promises an intriguing future for its characters. Recommended not let Jack have any sort of harem, and also to show more focus on the rest of the party, such as the lich. Please give Jack more male companions to balance out the party's gender ratio, and for his peace of mind.
This is an amazing original from this amazing author. He will be going places he is my favorite author. So far all the books I've read from this author are fuchkin pheonomanal. I hope to see more, I will hunt you if you drop any of these masterpieces. I would give money to support you I'm sure other others would too. Maybe think about setting something up.
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