Reviews of Reborn in DxD with OP Barrier and Enhancement Magic
Reborn in DxD with OP Barrier and Enhancement Magic
I_love_Rem
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
The writing quality is horrible, nothing else to say about this. The story development .... there isn't one, there's no point in this novel. The characters are horrible, the already made characters don't follow the original work, and are worst. The MC is simply trash, to throw in the toilet, he is dumb, scared of everything, uninteresting and so on .... As the author likes to justify, he isn't cunning or manipulative, you clearly don't know how to write these traits, or write at all. He is stupid, the other characters are simply put on such a low level that he seems intelligent. But even that doesn't work due to poor writing. The story has no purpose, and even fails at being a wish-fulfillment story. There is no conflict, no comedy, no interesting point. The world background isn't yours to begin with, and isn't exploited at all to begin with. Even in the original work nothing was exploited in that aspect so this novel follow the trend I guess.
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The worst characters in this novel is not a villain like riser but the main character he fucks up entire plot line then for stability of an non existent plot he doesn't let kuroka meet his sister kiba his friends and forces akeno his GF to be slave of rias. Despite of being an OP character his is a sissy who always hides. The harem is too forcefull and author clearly lack and creative brain power.
Writing Quality - I gave it a three, it's readable but there are instances were there is mistakes but it can be ignored. Even I make mistakes in my own but I still fix them daily. Stability of Updates - 5, giving out 1 - 2 chapters a day is a sign of good stability. Far better than I can do Story Development - 2, no offence here but I don't see a story. All I see is a Drama script a director gives to Actors to read their conversations and the detail of movements is minimal compared to others. And saying the MC is acting all of the time? No Offence but from what I read you're portraying the leaders of three great factions to be nothing more than fools. They have their playful side but war is not a joke, even the OG Novel did not take it this far as a joke. I understand a story needs to have a comedy but there are better ways. This is not the first nor the last I saw this kind of set up for novel it only makes me feel like I am asked to read my script and act according to it instead of a story. Character Design - 3 Star, the characters are portrayed quite well, no further comments to make it since it will only be my personal view. ------------- I would say this story has a good potential, but like I said. This novel makes me feel like I am reading a drama script for actors to use instead of a novel. --------------- I am certain one of the few will happen with this review: 1 - Deleted, 2- Complaints towards me, 3- Other. I have no qualms if people going to hate me for this review but this is my honest opinion. Have a nice day
