Comments of chapter undefined of I'm the King Of Technology
I'm the King Of Technology
lumydee
Chapter comments47
I have been reading your novel and its not bad but you should check the small inconsistency like landon invent a working combustion engine make a car but the most critical piece of technology electricity wasn't wasn't invented until 30 chapters later or the fact all the workers learn how to make some technology that would require tools that it is imposible to have without others tipe of technology to make those tools for example a LED there are various mistakes like that PD I'm in chapter 91 it a good novel so far but I recommend you to learn better how the technology work and fix those minor problem and I bet your novel will get more readers
HahahahahjajajhahhahahahaahhahahahahahAhahab Oh God. That does bring back some memories. They shoulda learned the arts of cameflage....you dress and act lIke bystander A...then You graduate to an incoNspicuous plant, then you graduate to wall paint. If you dont move he cant see you! His eyesight is based off a TRex!
