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Comments of chapter undefined of [BL] Quick Transmigration: Is it Better to be a Beta?

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Panda_ryn
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Thank you for the chapter!!! Also personally I love your style, and if people don’t like it they don’t need to read it. Especially when it’s not even constructive criticism, it’s them having an opinion about your personal writing style. Anyways I hope you have better luck interacting with those you admire, and feel a bit less down.

LittleBlueLake
LittleBlueLakeAuthorLittleBlueLake

Prince Silas, looking out into the distance: When will my shou come home? Abel, Darius and Dante, sitting behind Silas surrounded by blank papers: …Your highness please pull your weight. Prince Silas: You pull first. Abel, Darius and Dante: ‘…’ Abel, Darius and Dante, looking out into the distance: When will our group leader come home? Prince Silas: ‘…’

LittleBlueLake
LittleBlueLakeAuthorLittleBlueLake

Also a funny but painfully accurate meme by Arashi

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Loreili_465h
Loreili_465hLv1Loreili_465h

Great chapter! I think Kylan's psyche was written pretty well. The petting and treating Kylan like a lost puppy is also really cute.

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Fialova
FialovaLv3Fialova

yeah, writing unconventional things, or all around doing something unconventional is your choice, ya know? nobody can judge you or intervene if nobody getd hurt and your happy, tbh. in short: forge your own path, seek your own happiness!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!!

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Wonho_Pineapple
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This book is literally my favorite book and I get so excited when a new chapter comes out. This book would’nt be my favorite if I didn’t like the writing style and I learn a lot of phrases and new things. Thank you for the chapter, you did amazing as always.

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zebabycat
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honestly I love the way u write as you said bit of Chinese with English just comes out so beautifully so ya do what u do[img=recommend] uhhhh also can we get a threesome😳

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TheLazyDeathgod
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I get so excited every time I see this book has updated. I think it's my favorite book, honestly. I really love the way the author writes, and I love how colorful and interesting the world and characters are. Everything feels very 3d and real (even the chicken love interest, hah). Personally, I'm not very good with criticism, so I don't have anything good to say other than 🌠distraction🌠, like author mentioned, haha. Anyway, to be honest I think the author should do whatever they like. At this point I'm convinced they could write a story about sentient play dough and I'd be interested. If it's good, it's good, you know? Thanks for the chapter! P.S. Kylan is adorable in that junkyard dog sort of way. I wonder what he's going to do in the future now that he's met Jia, haha.

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Rainbowxions
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I ac really like your word choices here like Speak human I don’t know it adds flavor. Which is odd because in translations I usually hate them. If I had to point out a reason it wo be be because over time it has become a key part of your authorial voice.

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Zaiona
ZaionaLv14Zaiona

Your story is the reason I kept this app on my phone. I absolutely love it!

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SIIMMMPPPP
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okay so I can't really contribute to the whole translation discussion because it's all been said and my fingers would simply pass away. HOWEVER, I had a thought... and hear me out... what if ... werewolves... kylian... ya know THERE'S Evidence! like being stronger than usual.. being referenced as a puppy.. HEAD PATS. furthermore, I know what happens in Twilight.. it has vampires, it has gurl, it had secondary male lead that's werewolf.. like COME ON am in the only one seeing this! ps. author, I really like your style of writing, very addicting, much love. and I'm sorry someone you respected treat your work like that. just know that we support you completely and wholeheartedly.

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almapirata95
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jajaja i love the puppyKylan is so cute!!! º///v///º / Dont worry! I personally love this story and others fans too!! so keep doing what do you want and everything be ok!! (English is not my first lenguage, Is Spanish, so i hope that the rewiew is ok jaja)

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Rowan_Christopher
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Tetractys
TetractysLv15Tetractys

Thanks for the chapter! And I'm sorry to hear that some of the translators put you down. I'm not sure if it was on the discord (like the 'ah' conversation), but it isn't cool that happened. I keep the Chinese sayings and idioms all the time when I translate, it really adds that unique flavor that localizations miss out on. The same applies to original works, and I'm glad that you're including them in your work! Ahem, as for this chapter, it sounds like the loyal hound Kylen is here to stay!

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Vanyye
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Yay I'm so happy that there's a new chapter! Honestly I love your little additions of Chinese terms/slang; I read a lot of light novels so I even use those type of terms in my day to day vocabulary. I see no problem with you including that inside of your books

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Bethany_Davis_1319
Bethany_Davis_1319Lv4Bethany_Davis_1319

Such a cute chapter! Can't wait to see our silver eyed boy discover his savior is a boy! Also I really like your writing style author! our main character would talk like that so why wouldn't you add those bits. Plus I think it's really fun when you explain them, like a little peak into a different culture. Sucks that people you look up to made you feel that way, especially since you were so excited about starting this new arc. Sending love and appreciation 💙

WeissWinterprison
WeissWinterprisonLv11WeissWinterprison

As an obsessed reader of bl’s in general I would say that your work is one of the best I’v ever read and is even better than some of the Chinese to english translated stories that I have read. And as a British- Chinese person I find it extremely enjoyable when you add the idioms into your work because you somehow make them fit seamlessly into it without making it seem weird in my opinion plus it also lets me know about my Chinese culture a little more when you explain them too so you do you and keep adding those idioms if you want to!!

J_Palmer
J_PalmerLv14J_Palmer

I love your style! And the idioms and cultural sayings that you use are a part of your jokes! I don't even mind that you have to explain the joke, I just love how punny you are and this series has given me a lot of insight into tropes I otherwise wouldn't recognize. Your writing always makes me laugh and I look forward to your new chapters the most. I realize all writers must grow, but I wouldn't change the style of this series just because of some naysayers. Let them read something else; your fans love you!

mayrin_baek
mayrin_baekLv3mayrin_baek

Absolutely NOT!!!! Kylan!!!😣 dont be fooled by the Green Tea's outward appearance 😱🤔😣🤭😏

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OmegaHeat
OmegaHeatLv1OmegaHeat

hello good tube? I'm doing fine, sorry if there are any mistakes in writing and that I'm using a translator to write I'm not good at English, so I'm Brazilian I live in Brazil South America, I'm a Pisces sign with Sun in Leo, Pisces sign defines me very my personality, I am friendly, empathetic, understanding, loving, with my head in the clouds and very forgetful I rarely remember but things dear to me no matter how much they escape my mind they always come back and their stories are one of them there is not a day since I read them I can't stop thinking about the next episode, even when I get tired from work (I wish I had money to support your stories but the dollar is expensive and things here in Brazil are expensive due to interest inflation,