LittleBlueLake
Thank you for the chapter!!! Also personally I love your style, and if people don’t like it they don’t need to read it. Especially when it’s not even constructive criticism, it’s them having an opinion about your personal writing style. Anyways I hope you have better luck interacting with those you admire, and feel a bit less down.
Prince Silas, looking out into the distance: When will my shou come home? Abel, Darius and Dante, sitting behind Silas surrounded by blank papers: …Your highness please pull your weight. Prince Silas: You pull first. Abel, Darius and Dante: ‘…’ Abel, Darius and Dante, looking out into the distance: When will our group leader come home? Prince Silas: ‘…’
I get so excited every time I see this book has updated. I think it's my favorite book, honestly. I really love the way the author writes, and I love how colorful and interesting the world and characters are. Everything feels very 3d and real (even the chicken love interest, hah). Personally, I'm not very good with criticism, so I don't have anything good to say other than 🌠distraction🌠, like author mentioned, haha. Anyway, to be honest I think the author should do whatever they like. At this point I'm convinced they could write a story about sentient play dough and I'd be interested. If it's good, it's good, you know? Thanks for the chapter! P.S. Kylan is adorable in that junkyard dog sort of way. I wonder what he's going to do in the future now that he's met Jia, haha.
okay so I can't really contribute to the whole translation discussion because it's all been said and my fingers would simply pass away. HOWEVER, I had a thought... and hear me out... what if ... werewolves... kylian... ya know THERE'S Evidence! like being stronger than usual.. being referenced as a puppy.. HEAD PATS. furthermore, I know what happens in Twilight.. it has vampires, it has gurl, it had secondary male lead that's werewolf.. like COME ON am in the only one seeing this! ps. author, I really like your style of writing, very addicting, much love. and I'm sorry someone you respected treat your work like that. just know that we support you completely and wholeheartedly.
Thanks for the chapter! And I'm sorry to hear that some of the translators put you down. I'm not sure if it was on the discord (like the 'ah' conversation), but it isn't cool that happened. I keep the Chinese sayings and idioms all the time when I translate, it really adds that unique flavor that localizations miss out on. The same applies to original works, and I'm glad that you're including them in your work! Ahem, as for this chapter, it sounds like the loyal hound Kylen is here to stay!
Such a cute chapter! Can't wait to see our silver eyed boy discover his savior is a boy! Also I really like your writing style author! our main character would talk like that so why wouldn't you add those bits. Plus I think it's really fun when you explain them, like a little peak into a different culture. Sucks that people you look up to made you feel that way, especially since you were so excited about starting this new arc. Sending love and appreciation 💙
As an obsessed reader of bl’s in general I would say that your work is one of the best I’v ever read and is even better than some of the Chinese to english translated stories that I have read. And as a British- Chinese person I find it extremely enjoyable when you add the idioms into your work because you somehow make them fit seamlessly into it without making it seem weird in my opinion plus it also lets me know about my Chinese culture a little more when you explain them too so you do you and keep adding those idioms if you want to!!
I love your style! And the idioms and cultural sayings that you use are a part of your jokes! I don't even mind that you have to explain the joke, I just love how punny you are and this series has given me a lot of insight into tropes I otherwise wouldn't recognize. Your writing always makes me laugh and I look forward to your new chapters the most. I realize all writers must grow, but I wouldn't change the style of this series just because of some naysayers. Let them read something else; your fans love you!
hello good tube? I'm doing fine, sorry if there are any mistakes in writing and that I'm using a translator to write I'm not good at English, so I'm Brazilian I live in Brazil South America, I'm a Pisces sign with Sun in Leo, Pisces sign defines me very my personality, I am friendly, empathetic, understanding, loving, with my head in the clouds and very forgetful I rarely remember but things dear to me no matter how much they escape my mind they always come back and their stories are one of them there is not a day since I read them I can't stop thinking about the next episode, even when I get tired from work (I wish I had money to support your stories but the dollar is expensive and things here in Brazil are expensive due to interest inflation,