It’s good

I ac really like your word choices here like Speak human I don’t know it adds flavor. Which is odd because in translations I usually hate them. If I had to point out a reason it wo be be because over time it has become a key part of your authorial voice.

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Honestly I like long arcs so I see no problem with this

Yan Yans the scariest out of the three brothers

Amazing perfect 10/10 Would Capture all pretend dead men again.

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter.

No wonder Yan Yan wants to work there.

Its ok your family comes before everything I hope your grandmother Feels better.

Thank you for the chapters and take care.

Honestly I dont think this arc being long is a bad thing. I really like the group dynamic amd the more time we get to spend with them the better, not to mention the stuff you have setup for the rest of this arc looks super interesting.

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter. And I hope your getting payed more for all the work your now doing.

I know it's probably obvious in light of the fact that I once binged all of your first book and like a quarter of your second in three days but I really like your voice that comes through in your writing. So I am really glad that you decided to write and I thank your for it.

Thanks for your work.

Congratulations on finishing I hope you have I nice break.

By birth I am a only child but if you include ny step siblings I am a middle child.

Ready for Mile-high club baby number 3.

Puns