Tea_Tae
The flow in the story were very realistic. One will definitely can relate much from this. First POV's really is the best in my opinion and you brought it out here in WN. Thanks for making this story. I really enjoyed it much. You should change the apostrophe (') of the dialogue into the quotation marks (") :) It is a standard way of conversation. However, I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you release more chapters in the near future. Great job, Author!
The characters are portrayed in a realistic and convincing way. The plot is clear and enjoyable, and executed with an enthusiasm that clearly portrays the authorβs love of the subject. While I must confess I am no fan of the genre, I recognise a good work when I read one. I have often reviewed such stories, and I must say that this work belongs to the better ones I read. The language used is casual and laid- back, which is quite fitting. Overall a very diverting and satisfying story, I hope you enjoy writing the remainder of it.
Well I read some chapters of your work, and sincerely liked the way you write, and look that I do not like very much the genre, for me it became fluid and easy to understand who speaks, which I sometimes find difficult. And also the world around where I read was his weak point, but will know more ahead, right?.
On 45th chapter. ---- Okay! Okay! I have read a little, but am already jealous of the character Mia. Wow! If you are into 'reverse harem', this book is for you! Firstly, the books synopsis got my attention. The band members having a crush on the same girl. Writing is so simple and beautiful, keeps you engrossed. Chapters are small in length. Author does a mighty good job in character development. You get the feel of what's happening very soon. This is a hidden gem. Keep up the good work author. Well done!
First of all, this being a kpop genre/themed story already caught my interest from the start! Itβs interesting to see a reverse harem in here since most stories I would find arenβt like that. FL is such a relatable character especially when it comes to fangirling HAHAHAHA! Kudos to the author and keep up the good work! Writing Quality: I donβt think I found any grammar errors and the way the author described the characters and scenes is definitely deserving of 5 stars. Although my problem is the use of quotations. Unless itβs the authorβs style of using ββ instead of ββ, then I understand. Stability of Updates: Iβm not quite sure how frequent the author updates this story Story Development: Iβve only read up til a few chapters since it would take a longer time for me to make a review if I read up until the latest. So far, the bookβs smooth sailing on a good pace which is, no doubt, a good thing. Iβm sure future and current readers would certainly like this book as much as I did :)
An interesting story ... somewhat reminiscent of Korean dramas ... a big plus is that the chapters are small, written in simple and clear language. The story is not quite simple, there is a place for intrigue. What makes the story more twisted. It is too early to judge the story itself, I have read only 5 chapters. But what impresses is the excellent text form. Good luck to the author in his work!
I've been k-pop fan for 8 years now and I would love to have an interaction with my idol group as well, I would even be fine with me being water girl if ever as long I will be able to be close to them. The closer the better, from the synopsis I'm already envious of Mia. It's every fangirl's dream to be known by their idols or even by their rival group. If you're kind of stuck with the same predicament as mine you should read this novel. π
Shameless Author review (I think?) I'm gonna take a break of two days from this story. Currently, there is another one I'm working on (The Idol's Wife) and I need to put some focus there. I'll update this one as soon as I am done with at least 3 chapters of my other novel. Meanwhile, love you 3000 peeps!
DEAR i must say that this book is rare to see. very nice. it needs to get more exposure.i can put your books name as a recommendation in a lot of my novels especially the one i focus on most. i hope this can help. but this story is good,good. dear,i've been offered a contract and i'm freaking out though i asked for it mostly because i'm underaged. well i have some time to think about it. but im ready for a challenge. dont congratulate me yet