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So far this series has been amazing, its well thought out, near to none grammatical errors, and fairly realistic. It has a system thats more of a helper than an OP tool. The world building is very well done. The authors doesn't give the entire history of the world in one go, they slowly give small info dumps and hints about the world making you realize this might not be earth and you're left craving more. This series is only about 20ch in when i made this review so take it with grain of salt. But ive been seeing very small hints and foreshadowing that this novel will become a sy-fi action and it is extremely well done because you don't know if its true or not, it makes you think. And when a novel manages to make me go back and read to see if the hints might be real I give an automatic 5stars. Summary/Pro's -well thought out -small but precise info dumps -not OP system/character -overall entertaining -so far amazing worldbuilding Cons- -It's basically a slice of life rn (but that could change in the future) -story pace is kinda slow -stop making me want moar Like I said take it with a grain of salt, the story is only 25ch in, It can easily change.
This is quickly turning into one of my favorite stories on Webnovel. The MC, Michael is relatable, the System is snarky, and the advances he is making are incremental. He gains increases in stats in .001 increments, so he although he may become OP at some point, it is going to take a while. I like watching the MC work for his rewards.
Quality of writing- Above Average Stability of updates- Stable Story Development- So far, good Charcter Design- Interesting World building- Too soon to comment A novel with an interesting original premise. Has good potential. Would be very pleased if there are more chapters with the same or higher quality of content. Keep up the good work!
I very rarely give 5 star reviews on stories but this one if it claimed to deserve 4 stars no other author would dare say there's was worth 5. I am absolutely smitten by this story and the authors style, it feels like I'm reading something I've lost long ago, but what is it that I've lost? Joy. I havent gotten joy from reading in a long time, but this one, it makes me happy in an Indescribable way, I feel like I'm on a high while reading this, i love it.
Absolutely amazing job.. please continue the work.. Looking forward to it. Loving the sci-fi element. The story premise is good and if looking for slice of life I would recommend more interactions of mc with family and friends. Some Character development of his sibolings may do some good. Food for thought Cheers!!!
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