AngelWings
Tbh my novel isn't that good but I'd appreciate it if you have it a read 😊 Just don't expect to much haha I guess it's an alright thing to read if you're really bored and just want something light-hearted to read. Don't expect something really complex, I'm just a normal person with no talent in writing, attempting to create a light hearted maybe funny (?) story
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Nothing too complex, very simple straightforward plot. The main character has personality and definitely makes the story a lot more interesting with her view and she’s super OP - hence why the plot is so straightforward. The system is also starting to show some personality which should be fun at least and overall it’s a good story to pass the time. I do hope there will be more world building and interaction with the characters though since it’s just mainly about the MC by herself kicking ass with her OPness and the other characters are either being kicked or just... there. I don’t know that’s just my opinion. Keep writing!
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I read a lot of QL, so it may be my standards, but this novel is not for me. The Female Protagonist have no boundary, she is too OP. The story is bland with no exciting drama, just one side face-slapping as the villains/leads of the worlds that she go through seems to lose their OP-ness or brain when coming in contact with her. The characters don’t have much personality to them. The author is trying too hard to make the hatred of cliche and stupid main characters be face slapped that it got too boring. The face slapping is soook boring, it ain’t even face slapping. This novel is one of the reason why I think Yaoi Systems are better than BG. This novel started off as good, but turn bad as the author even got bored of the arc half way, which turns into a filler, which is one of the worst fillers I have ever read. It looks promising at first, but seems like a novel where the Beta System is needed.