Good enough to pass the time reading, with coherent writing (other than the translation) and funny characters. The plot is repetitive and full of Mary Sue cliches, but that's pretty much expected and not a big deal. The main issue is the translation. It's MTL'ed quite obviously. Sometimes it's impossible to figure out what was written before the translators butchered it. Names and nouns are incredibly inconsistent, though not as much as various other works I've seen. As long as you do some detective work it's still legible mostly.

With the way sound was said to travel through walls there, I wonder how many people are listening to this?

Good point, she has the thing from the ML

I thought she couldn't put living things in those rings?

Call me paranoid but I still think he planned this whole "rescue"

I always assumed they're both pieces of the same soul, and one was just absorbed into the other. I mean. they did say Ximen You Yue's soul was missing a piece right? Also what other way would they explain the transmigration?

So whenever they fight, it's like visiting the planetarium? Or rather stepping on it's ceiling?

Now I'm just waiting for Daisy and Buttercup

Aww do that now! No need to wait

What a thankless position, he should quit.

*two vines together <vine> into There's an extra word there. 🍀

I think it's mouthwatering not mouth-water. I thought I'd point out small mistakes like this to be helpful because the author seems to like it. Let me know if you want me to stop 🍀

I think you meant Aqua here not Korra? Not sure she's been recognized yet

Very well put together with a lot of depth both to the characters and setting. The writing style feels very professional much better than most stories on this site. The sad part of the plot progresses slowly but things do get better. The way the author portrays the main character's inner conflict and resolve is very expressive. For a long time I was wondering why in the world I was still reading this depressing thing (first few hundred chapters), but I think part of it was the way the main character still manages to survive and have a will to live no matter what.

Probably the desire to eat her soul

And yet the kid seems the most dangerous of all to me..

No it's clearly Shiva and Luca's fault for coming up with the whole plan to see if the demon could still take Terry, over only to lose interest halfway and let everything backfire because of their short attention span..

Glad to help 😊

Wrong name here

Thanks for the explanation ☺️