Reviews of The Ripples

I'm still a beginner when it comes to writing but I'll do my best to make a Murder-Mystery Romance that is set in Taiwan. You might notice a lot of grammatical errors but I will do my best to edit it because everything posted is mostly 1st drafts. I want to point, however, that I dislike abusive romance, which was why I refrain myself doing so. This is why I don't know why some people pointed out an 'abusive' character in my story. Just hoping that they don't assume this solely just because of the vengeance theme but actually reading the story. Thank you for checking this book out and happy reading!

FEMALE LEAD IS INTERESTING! Found this by coincidence while author recommended reading my story. I'm quite the writer of female MCs myself so I find this great and can recommend it to everyone that it has good story, creativity wise, no grammar lapses and word construction is good. Cool that author has already planned a couple of chaps. Looking forward to this. Keeping this to my library. :) The plot is fast paced and the dialogue is entertaining to read and indulge.

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This is a review of the first chapter. The female lead has just married to an abusive man who has a grudge against her father. To protect her father and herself, she has agreed to not speak with her father ever again. The plot is fast paced and well written. The dialogue provided a contrast between the characters and is well done!

Fun fact, your novel has similarities to a novel I reviewed yesterday, (I will continue reading, but I do not have the time right now) Called What a Dream Wants, forgot the author's name as of right now, haha Both are really educational and tie into a deeper mystery of events, that is just beginning to unravel. My advice for you is to make your writing style a bit more interesting because there are portions where I feel as if the writing isn't as engaging, but I really like the concept, so 5 stars. Added to library!

Your story, author, although i must say that starts bland and a little boring, begins to steadily to sum every important part to create something more promising and complex. You did a good job with the characters. They are rounded and feel human. The spot on is the relationship dinamycs between the main characters. Good, abusive characters are some of the hardest to write. You've done a good job with this. You definitely need to work with your grammar. It can make the story exhausting to read. If you aren't a native Engish Speaker you can use many grammar correctors out there on the Internet. Good job. Keep improving it.