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Fun fact, your novel has similarities to a novel I reviewed yesterday, (I will continue reading, but I do not have the time right now) Called What a Dream Wants, forgot the author's name as of right now, haha Both are really educational and tie into a deeper mystery of events, that is just beginning to unravel. My advice for you is to make your writing style a bit more interesting because there are portions where I feel as if the writing isn't as engaging, but I really like the concept, so 5 stars. Added to library!

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