Cynk_Napp
A sound. The noise it makes proves not of the treble, but the potential music creation. The twisting and jumping notes on each page, continuously dance to its rythm, as if the whole world was a symphony. I dare not say of what I would become, without such a sweet noice. Encompassed and yearning for more, I'm aware that the music must stop. Anyway. I like poetry, and I'm happy that someone actually published some of it here. Especially here... There were a few mistakes, but I enjoyed it nevertheless. In this case I'm making an exception, and will not give you lower points due to releases. You deserve such score, even if you release 1ch a week.
So this is a compilation of poems, am I correct? So far the poems written in the book is good. Every poem that is written per chapter tells a story in detail. It is unique since most stories are written by prose or maybe I have not encountered such work of literature. My opinions about the work is it is unique and mysterious. You have to analyze the meaning of the poem to get the gist of the story. It's a good read all in all.
The opening is well planned but shortly stated which could confuse a beginner reader but as it slowly developed the pace, the prose quality unfold to a next level. Haha..usually I am thick skinned about poetry but this author is really doing well to bring it alive, really, a new level of romance.โบโบโบ
This is a really cool poem. It took me a long time to understand what each line meant because I'm not very familiar with this style. My favourite line from the poems is this one: "I was disused and fell in despair to the ground. Clattering in dejection. Unawares in grief, I slid into your embrace." I like how there is a mix of short sentences and long sentences and even just single words. Poems can be really different from stories as you can be a lot more expressive and be creative with sentence structure.
I would like to say very good poems, please continue the good work. Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!! Next chapter !!!
Well poems!!! I really like creative ones!! And your seems to fit in my mind. I would like to say a hob well done. Although the update stability is not good, I xam understand as you are writing poems!! Really feels great how you depict the elements and their bonding. Keep up the work! I'll add this one in my library for a wonderful collection of proses.
At first, I thought it was romance, after reading through the first chapter I was like.. Damn!! Poems... It's my first time reading poems in a web novel... I don't usually read poems because I don't understand them ๐ but I really do adore poets. I feel like they have some kind of magic power for them to write poems. Good work, poet๐