(BL) Brightening a Grey World

Cute story of a cupid type god who's sweet and innocent to the world of men, and his mission whom he has to find a match for. Jacob tends to drop the f-bomb regularly, that's due to his character's upbringing and reflection of a hard life. The story is well written and paced nicely. The relationship is developing at a realistic pace. Good luck with the competition.

I have no idea why this has no reviews at all for what is turning out to be a wonderful story, so here I am. Wonderful writing quality, stable 1 chapter per day update rate, amazing plot development and characterization, and well, modern day stuff with detail. 5⭐️ for all. Like the Caitlyn’s other stories, it shows how difficult but wonderful the strength to move on is. To put it short, the bridge of connection and love blooms beautifully. Not as blatantly funny as her AI story, but the fluff and warmth is greater.

Obligatory review: Slow, but meaningful. Modeled a bit after various slice of lifes. Read about how a slum boy manages to fall in love with an 'immortal.'

So cute! The reactions and wishes they have for each other! How very giving Harris is! How tentative and lovely the process of learning to let someone in! Such a sweet story!

This is honestly very bland... At the start this novel you already see those character in relation with each other its fine but with no character development and background story is so shalow. because you can have a bomb BL with a bit plot development with so much bed scenes- but this is just straight up bland. Somehow every chapter just seems like a long and extensive dialog about things that could be summarized by a fraction of the sentences used. There's so many instances where the MC is just crazy in with each other like willing but seems not willing. but really has nothing to do with the story and no value in the narrative or in character development. Hard to enjoy, even at begining you a lot feeling choking yourself really. There are no value to read it.