Item: (BL) Brightening a Grey World
Rating: 1.4
Author: daoistfaceslaps

daoistfaceslapsLv25yr

2019-07-15 05:29

This is honestly very bland... At the start this novel you already see those character in relation with each other its fine but with no character development and background story is so shalow. because you can have a bomb BL with a bit plot development with so much bed scenes- but this is just straight up bland. Somehow every chapter just seems like a long and extensive dialog about things that could be summarized by a fraction of the sentences used. There's so many instances where the MC is just crazy in with each other like willing but seems not willing. but really has nothing to do with the story and no value in the narrative or in character development. Hard to enjoy, even at begining you a lot feeling choking yourself really. There are no value to read it.

(BL) Brightening a Grey World

CaitlynRaines

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