May1st
Author here! This review was more like a spoiler, but I think it's necessary. First, thanks for checking out the story and hope u enjoy reading it. The romance in the book came late, because Diana wasn't really based on romance alone. The story is about how she grow from a simple easy-to-bully girl, train to be an assassin, get her revenge + love, then become a girl that couldn't be dared. She's not perfect and makes lots of mistakes, and as an evil author that I am, I made a few twist to tease u guys, but dont fall for it. Ethan is the Ml and Of cause Diana is his darling sweetheart. If you could follow the plot to see where I'm taking it, I'm sure you wouldn't regret giving the story a try. Have fun and believe me, you will understand how this review would save you from my tease later..... 😂 Have fun reading. Thanks ❤
This is a very interesting novel. Still at chapter 18 and really looking forward to reading more. Hoping that FL gets to be reunited with her parents soon. Actually, I want to know more about her parents. haha. Don't get me wrong, I also look forward to the development of Diana and Ethan. Best of luck dear author and more power to you.
I always have a soft spot for FLs who refuses to be bullied. Banzaii lol The overall idea is actually engaging and makes one curious to find out the crux of it. I honestly rarely give reviews because I'm very picky with the writer's grammar and flow of the storytelling in general. Now with these two mentioned above, I sincerely like the fluidity of the paragraphs. They connect well with each other. I confess to hating too much redundancy in any story and would drop it ASAP. I am happy that this story has a nice flow going in it. There is confidence where the author wants to take his readers with each scene and it makes unfolding the mystery more exciting. On another note, I'd like for the author to put more care and focus on grammar development when he/she has time. A simple check of whether the words are capitalized correctly when they should is a very easy feat and do not require much technical knowledge. This would make reading better as the readers will know that it's the beginning of a new sentence. If she/he has time, then a quick practice/ learning focused on the subject-verb agreement, tenses, punctuation, and word choice would make this book totally better. With this, I wish the author good luck, keep up the good work, and looking forward to more development.
My review now is different from my original review. After sticking with this novel despite my nit-picky habit with grammar, the author tremendously improved. Not only the story’s depth and plot, but also her grammatical errors seem to have lessened. I don’t actually think about the errors at this point, I’m completely concentrated on the story. If you don’t read this book, you’re missing out. It starts off almost ordinary despite its unique start, but when it goes deeper... it’s like you’re lost at sea. I love this book and the author does 2-3 chapters a day (Wow!) Though I didn’t care much about the characters at first, after knowing them through their childhood gave me a better of glimpse of their identities. Fighting! Keep on writing, author!
I really liked how the author started the story, also the plot is very relevant it does not only give you a good story but it also teaches you something you could use in your daily lives. To the author, thank you for giving the all the people who feel insecure because of being judged because of their looks a piece of advice that they always have a choice to stand up for themselves. 👌
This is one kind of unique romantic book I have gone through. I totally love the story flow. It is not like another novels where the FL is shown as a angel descended from heaven. Diana is simple, flawed and normal looking girl. The story is light and enjoyable with no major misunderstandings.... Kuddos to author for selecting a unique story.. M
I don't even know where to begin with. The storyline is really good. I like how it starts and then slowly progresses. I like how the characters are drawn. You won't find much grammatical errors here except for a few typos but that's all. I just looovvvvveeeeeeeeee the story. Definitely will suggest reading this one.♥️👍 You are doing a good job author. Keep it up and best of luck for future.♥️♥️♥️
I really liked the way you have started the book. Synopsis and Prologue are interesting. Full marks for them. The thing which bugged me was grammar and especially the think you haven't ended the sentences with full stop! I mean this is the basic thing which we learn in language. Focus on your grammar and I am sure your book will get the needed attention. This book is full of potential. The only problem is silly grammatical mistakes.
Haha. What's wrong with me? Gosh, I just started reading this and I can't stop. Believe me this story is refreshing to the core! It's different from our usual Chinese stories. She isn't beautiful but her goddamn shape is something you can't help but compliment her for... Diana the ever sexy queen and Ethan? I just started reading so I don't know for sure what the future beholds but I can see something blossoming. Anyway he's damn handsome with blue eyes... Sadly I have never met anyone with blue eyes... Mine's golden-brown though 😝😅😚