In the beginning of the story, I would have to admit that I did find some issues with characterization and just the whole idea of it. Sure, the idea of a less-than-pretty girl who doesn't have a whole life of riches was tempting. But let's be real, it was sure to spin off into that whole idea of a CEO falling in love with her despite her looks because of inner beauty right? She would end up just gaining more confidence and finding her one true love, and the plotline would spin off to yet another cliche. Psyche. The novel took a whole spin into something completely different. An interesting chemistry? Check. A bold and self-reliant FL who sees past her own flaws while not winning over the entire world? Check. Actual character development and world-building? Check. I think the part that I least expected was for all of the characters to actually tie back to the original story arc as if it was all planned beforehand. Anyways..... Writing Quality: If you don't mind the occasional capitalization error and tense issue, you'll be fine. They don't really interfere with your understanding of the story, much less your enjoyment. Stability of Updates: I get like a notification a day lol Story Development: See above, enough said. Character Design: It's like an all-inclusive package but still doesn't end up becoming just a mess. World Background: Lots and lots of action ^-^
May1st
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LIKEHuh yeah? Is there something wrong with that? Like the story has two main arcs, and it ties back in the end to wrap up some potential plot holes
BlackRose68:Tie back to the original story arc ???
Jenjibread:Huh yeah? Is there something wrong with that? Like the story has two main arcs, and it ties back in the end to wrap up some potential plot holes