Reviews of Đeleted

It's a really nice novel. Updates are also pretty consistent. And this is the first pokemon can fanfic I read with no harem. If possible can someone recommend another pokemon fanfic for me please?

Change the synopsis because it doesnt say what the novel is about, for example is the MC someone important or a normal teenager, does he have an advantage etc...

Well, thanks for the run. While something of a let down, I wish you all the best. You do you. ...............................................................

good series, I hope you continue with the good work.,................,...,...................................................................,.....................................................................................

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The writing quality sucks but the story doesn’t seem bad I just really cringy because of some of the ways you describe it you should go back and read what you wrote

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Love this novel and the author is super cool he let his mc make a guest appearance in my novel legendary shadow which was pretty cool of him. I recommend this novel to all.

Really nice novel, one which FINALLY has no harem. If possible, can you help me find or write a pokemon novel with a female MC? But well doneeeeeeeee

Very recommended for everyone like story' about pokemon. Form start author explain this pokemon world so "Awesome". Note if just don't know next chapter author you must try play Gba game pokemon. That much more ide about this Thanks for good story

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nice pokemon fanfic. i enjoyed reading this . I like the story progress and characters . i hope you improve battles and some fluff time as well as interactions with some other characters as basically they are absent in novel.

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This is where the novel is currently at. (Chapter 20) Writing quality is good, if it has good grammar and isn't something that consists of, "And then then he and and and she and and did that that did did and then did that she that and then." Then it's good enough. Stability of updates don't really have a steady stream but the quality of the story is good so it makes up for that. Story development is though out but a bit of canon rules and following here and there, hopefully the author turns his head away from canon and makes this work truly his own. Making a fan-fiction isn't about following canon, it's about making it your own story. But I do agree, the canon is subtle currently but it was sometimes forced in the earlier chapters. Character design? Fear of older sister cliche, I wasn't afraid of any authoritative figure when I was younger. Now that I'm older? I wouldn't say fear, but more of trauma. Woah now, this just got personal. But yeah, I just feel like the fear of certain family members is used way too much. It added flavor the first few times in the chapter but got old quick. Thankfully we're away from said older sister. World background? It's Pokemon. You can't say it's not good besides the team rocket and all those other evil organizations along with some annoying troupes spread around. Overall, it's a good read and the author has good potential. The story isn't fast paced either but isn't too slow as well, so that's a bonus in my opinion. I have yet to see a golden finger or anything extremely special about the MC besides being a genius. Aura user? Psychic user? Dunno, don't really care since this is already entertaining.

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