Reviews of Lily Green
Lily Green
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- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
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The character seem shut in a shell. You lack vocabulary and the emotions are neglected throughout. The surroundings are omitted making it poor understanding of where everything is happening. Though I found the storyline interesting but with proper editing and a little focus on certain things this could be far better. GOOD LUCK ❤
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