Reviews of My new life in One Piece

There is only one chapter left to finish volume one of this story. I hope everyone is enjoying this novel at the moment. When the last chapter of volume one is published, I will continue writing more chapters after a break of two weeks or a month. It may take a little longer but don't worry, I will not abandon this story. Changing the subject, I am thinking of publishing two new stories at the moment. One has several chapters already made and the other is yet to begin. Maybe during the break of this story publish one of the two stories that I have commented now.

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Being completely honest about the novel, I think it has a lot of potential, however that potential is completely ruined by the fact that it's completely unreadable. I have no idea what is going on and the fact that the characters change genders or refer to themselves as I, him, she, he and her is ridiculous and I'm talking about a character that refers to themselves as all that mentioned before. I am also unsure if the author changes the perspective as it is fucking annoying to be sherlock homes and try to decifer the message the author has left. It reminds me of a google translated chapter but worse. All in all, the author just needs to writw better or get and editor and then it will ba all good. P.S. Sorry if the review sounds weird. I as writing on a phone.

Story is really good to have mc as a marine im looking forward to the development of mc when conflict between pirates and marines arise what will he chooses but it have a lot of grama mistakes that need an improvement that is how the writer use He She Him Her in wrong position

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Good story. The one thing that really bugs me in this novel is the usage of "he, his, him, she hers and her" they are used totally randomly. It should really be fixed. It's like an itch in the butt while you're in a public place.

I like the story so far, I hope it turns out better then I expect.

Great story so far keep it up!!! You should make kaido's katana the shodai kitetsu,or at least where he finds it. You should make it where the katana that tsuru gave him is damage beyond repair. He finds the shodai kitetsu on an island in the new world,or the grandline.

Cant stand bad grammar. I dont mind shit spelling but omg, this novel gets on my nerves. I will not reccommend this novel. Author cant tell between male and female, dialog is short and uneventfull. Would rather shave my toe-nails off then read another chapter.

Super intersant et original bonne utilisation du monde de base et une utilisée de même anga original dans l’histoire les personnages secondairest sont aussi super bien utilisés

I really like this novel. The only little problem it has is the Grammer and the release for new chapters are slow. Please continue the story I really enjoy it 😁

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Has potential but the writting quality is too bad to read-!!!!+!!!!!!!!!!!! Has potential but the writting quality is too bad to read-!!!!+!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Can't do it, it's just one of those things that bothers me too much. Story is great but this is a deal breaker for me, sorry. He, She, Him, Her -- How do you get these mixed up so much???

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I THINK THIS BOOK HAS POTENTIAL EXCEPT FOR ITS WRIITING MISTAKES BUT ALL IN ALL A GOOD BOOK!!! ........................................................

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Very bad grammer and spelling. Cannot understand most words. Its even worse than a machine translation sometimes. Brain hurts reading it after 5chapters.