"Talking" 'Thinking'

Why is Snape asking an orphan who only got his letter 3 days ago and didn't know of the magical world before then, what house he prefers? Author, what are you doing my guy?

I enjoy the story but the MC is just a bit too much.

MC is a a god damn idiot. Every single chapter the same thing happens. He doesn't think about consequences or he just puts something to the back of his mind because he thinks it doen't apply to other things. The best part is that every single decision he has ever made since chapter one has come back to bite him in the ass in one way or another. I'm going to keep reading simply because there are so few decent WoW FFs out there. Just wish the author wouldn't make the MC so dumb.

False hope being that I thought this was a chapter.

Have to be honest, would have rather you just put out a chapter tomorrow or something than give me false hope. 😥

I thought this sounded familiar and sure enough it is. It's from FF.net, not sure why you didn't include that in the summary, can only assume you want people to think you wrote it.

Author is too lazy to spend 15 seconds on google to find out a characters name, so they just make one up.

"Haven't read the story, but i'll give it 5 stars anyway" This right here is why garbage stories have 100's of 5 star reviews.

"Going to try to avoid clichés" "MC is not a huge spiderman fan" You then proceed to make a mc that acts exactly like spiderman. Would love to see a story about a peter parker that breaks the spiderman mold, dosen't have to be a murderhobo, just something different.

Loved all the 40k stuff, then it went to Cyberpunk 2077 and became garbage.

This is officially garbage, peace out

Seems like a decent story so far, only major dislike is how short the chapters are. Takes less than 3 minutes to read a chapter. ............

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Can you put something like "Lemon Start" "Lemon End" for those scenes? I like the story, just don't care for lemons.

When meeting with Coulson he could hear the snipers around them.

"hear them speak"