I am me.
Summary specifically states Marvel Cinematic Universe, thus is not under any circumstance MCU, this is Harry Potter, X-Men, Marvel and who knows what else.
Between chapters you forget what direction you were taking the story, this has happened several times already, sorry to say but this novel is getting worse the longer it goes on.
This is just so dumb.
Has an MCU tag and then adds everything from Marvel Comics and just destorys any possibility of keeping anything from MCU. I love MCU, but I detest Marvel Comics. MCU makes sense and has an order to it, whereas Comics just throws everything in the toilet, flushes it and hopes what comes out makes some kind of sense.
I don't know what you're writing with but you need to get something else that doesn't put little boxes everywhere. Also you skipped 10 years of his life, we don't know if his parents are alive, where he went if they died or ANYTHING.
Feels and sounds like a wuxia novel and that is absolutely wrong for the Naruto World. And using English translation of Kekkei Genkai just seems wrong.