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QUACK QUACK QUACK QUACK, hmmm hmmm *coughing* 1)Enough stupidity for today, let's get down to real business, the plotline although stretched many times, almost like author want to increase his word count, but still it's an amazing piece of story without many visible plot holes that could be found in many original stories from non-native writers. 2) Stability of update, I guess this bar should be removed because new and original authors would have a time doing something completely new. 3) Story by far is very realistic to the point of ultra core graphics *just kidding*, it's very relatable everyone acts natural and do not perform sheer stupidities all the time. 4) Although a bit mangled, he's a new template not many have explored. 5) I don't know much about the world background except the earth is Infact the same.
Starts off interesting, but the MC is so utterly unlikeable it kills the story. He doesn't work for a single thing; he's thrown into impossible situations and miraculously saved by happenstance every time. He doesn't think for himself at all, not acting until forced to by outside sources. The only thing he has going for him is plot armor. The scale of the story gets too big way too quick as well. Instead of building the MC up gradually and slowly having him face stronger beings he immediately gets thrown into scenarios he absolutely cannot survive until something, or someone, he has nothing to do with saves him. Why are these godlike beings bothering to go out of their way to do anything with him? The story has a lot of potential, but it's trying to do too much at once.
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