Daishouri
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The story is interesting. I have read a lot of system type/ game novels and this feels similar to some popular ones(not that it is bad) but again its difficult to write something VERY original. The character are different and feel real( not a fan of killing characters though). Writing was good and the story was also captivating! Overall this was good and I can't wait for more chapters (This is just an opinion and you can ignore this but please no more killing, i started to like Rick)