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LoneBee

LoneBee

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I really like reading novels, so i’ll maybe try to create some myself

2019-04-22 JoinedGlobal
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  • LoneBee
    LoneBee2yr
    Commented

    thank you for another good chapter <3

    Ch 81 King of Guardian Fish
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    Games · HotIce
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  • LoneBee
    LoneBee2yr
    Posted

    i would definitely recommend, but that is just because i really enjoy gaming novels, but the story is nice, mc doesn’t feel op or something and there is already some character development. if you’re not sure if you want to read it just read a couple of chapter and decide if it’s worth it after :)

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  • LoneBee
    LoneBee2yr
    Commented

    hii, i just wanted to say i really like your novel, hope you continue writing :) (be sure to take breaks if you need to) this novel made my days a little better after some family issues… so i appreciate you writing this novel, have binged all of the chapters

    Ch 80 Boss Monster
    altalt
    Noob Player
    Games · HotIce
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  • LoneBee
    LoneBee3yr
    Commented

    U might not have known that die should be dice, but please change it

    Ch 2 The D20
    altalt
    I am controlled by a D20?!
    Games · Destro_35
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  • LoneBee
    LoneBee3yr
    Replied to LoneBee

    And u used a (singular) and used die (plural in old english)

    Ch 1 Complete the survey
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    I am controlled by a D20?!
    Games · Destro_35
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  • LoneBee
    LoneBee3yr
    Commented

    Started reading and came across the wrong word. U used die instead of dice (dice is both singular and plurar in modern english. U can look it up if u want)

    Ch 1 Complete the survey
    altalt
    I am controlled by a D20?!
    Games · Destro_35
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