Comments of chapter undefined of The Greatest Sith Lord

What vibe I am getting from him is someone at starkillers level of force abilities and creativity(with room to grow and not the clone version) but he would get smacked in lightsaber dueling against him.... Would be interesting if he used two lightsabers and can channel the force with his lightsaber like how starkiller puts lightning on his lightsaber why not use it like a wand lol dont call it a wand since that would just sound dumb but it would have the same concept. like he is locked in a duel but he uses the force through his lightsaber to push them off or he drains them

Great chapter, i hope the MC will master more forms of lightsaber combat soon. Still at his age he could probably trash anakin right? They are around the same age, though i wonder how would he stand against a more powerful and experienced jedi... Btw, i hope he won't just use hatred to power himself. Passion will work just as well as hatred.

Thanks for the chapter! I doubt that our *your* Mc will be overpowered at the moment but that fight showed us his progress, which is good, and considering that he fought that good against a Sith Lord that was considered one of the most dangerous, feared, and powerful Sith at his time and maybe even this age than our Mc has a promising future....and he is only 14 on top of that. It was a good chapter and I can't wait for more. Question: Is it possible that the Mc will drain a whole planet in the future or did you even consider it? Many for my desire to see him showing off his power to his slav.. *caught* I mean, Subordinates!

MORE I NEEDZZZ MOREZZZZ NOWZZ PLZZZZ!!!

Author! Since you have already began describing Leo's eyes with the characteristic of 'twinkling' maybe you should have Leo invent a new force power 'Dumbledore's Bewitching Eyes'. The twinkling eyes can invoke trust in whomever matches eyes with Leo. It'll be a surprisingly useful force power. Secondly, Leo should definitely consider inventing some regeneration type force power in the future. In the Star Wars universe, it's too easy to be handicapped. Having a cybernetic replacement is vastly inferior to its organic equivalent.

my one and only piece of advice would be to not have leo or anyone else actually say the name of a technique that they are using, makes it sound too much like dragon ball z.

I like ur story...but my starwars knowledge is almost black....if u can..give info that allows a reader like me to get ur bk [ie: references, etc ]

Some other ideas from people

but in this design

Our lightsaber

Thanks

I don't care anymore about telling his spells. Need more of this:

Why don't use 'Rage Power' from u getting played by Gear of Fate?

Naha sadow, tulak hoard , etc hoping to see them all

I do hope he keeps his word to revive n remake them in his image nihlus also wasnt apart of banes rule of two which is just nuts when you think about it hope your mc is more valkoran like now that was a true sith to me

Why say the name of the force powers out loud?

And the hutt cartel dosn't react for tatooine ?

Will his saber be just red or would it be different? And would it be dual wield, one/two-handed, or twin?

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