75BlackFlames
Same thing as the show no differences and yet some people are actually saying good job like he put some effort in. The protagonist is idiotic and makes dumb mistakes even though he says he knows the ins and outs of this universe. If you say this is good just go watch the show because same plot same characters just better quality.
Wtf why everybody like this? I mean its a transcript of the show. With a porly writen mc, stiff conversartions. the mc is barry with a system because for all we know he has no personality, hes perfect,smart etc. But the writer managed to do that by making everybody else stupid. Instead of killing wells asap he plays around doing the same **** barry did. He claims to be a speedster but hes actually only using barry allen spesster powers. Theres no power he created or learned that was not barry allen. Tbh this is not 1 stars bad, just found those 5 stars soo misleading that giving 1 star should at least bring it closer to the real value of 3 stars that this novel deserves.
I have a issues with the character personality, 1. Batman is like out of character, he didn't brood he agreed fast specially on flash when making and suggest his plan. I mean flash dictate the battle with darkside. I think batman didnt even think and just go with the flow specially when flash suggest something. 2. Caitlyn Snow is so different from the tv show and in your fic. In tv show 1st season she can't get over on her dead ex boyfriend Ronnie turned Firestorm but on your fic she easily get hooked by your MC/Barry. 3. No character background and build up in this fic like it centers all in Barry and side character like cisco and wells and others are like normal NPC from the game and when the plot needed them and you need to write a dialogue, you include them, they just there like no other personality and just needed to make the plot progress. Issue here is how the character develop but I really love OP mc in fanfic I hope this fic get better. Reccomend you read shawn129 fic, flash there has depth characterization and hes OP too.
Hmm, How to say, It's like mc is like a game characters doing the same but at a little faster rate then that of original Flash. Disappointment that a great chance is wasted on Mc. He is naive, donot use his transmigrated memory, strictly follows cannon, doesn't use guns & weapons not even knuckle. Even if I put it all aside he has no mastery of his own power and seriously lacks creativity I mean atleast original Flash was good at hacking with the use of speed force, Mc only uses it in fights and like I get it that he have strong healing powers but to improve it, is it necessary to crash while running, dummest Mc I think. well that's all I gives a feeling of reading a game characters daily life rather than novel.
It's the same as the show. No it's way worse than the show . The MC is a moron. And it's got inconsistencies and mistakes that are way too obvious to be anything but the writing of an idiot .I've taught English as a second language to people who better understand cause and effect in writing . It's horrible . And the reviews got my hopes up too. Sad .