Xandarx
Hello dear author as a reader I have to say that I liked the previous course of the story, a little advice as a reader is that you take your time to write each chapter and do not get stressed by the comments of some people so the story will be more fluid and concise. At the moment I have nothing more to say, so I look forward to this new beginning, my dear author.
Cool idea, terrible execution. Horrible grammer. Its also so full of plot holes and unrealistic data that it just burns by eyes. Most of this data could be googled super easily. Such as the prices of things, distances and ages. Cultural settings as well.. Honestly it reads like an Indian version of Sheldon from big bang theory wrote this with raj his intelligence or lack there of. For what is supposed to be a art business type character... This really doesn't hit the nail
The grammar and atrocious mistakes are holding this novel back. Its weird changing the present tense to past tense in the same sentence. The economics are also full of **** for the seventies and that shows zero research from the author. All it would take would be a simple google search to find the information.