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MC: MALE his story IS NOT a harem, it's a strictly monogamous relationship. Who the female lead is is pretty apparent. The main character is a genius The progression moves fairly quickly early on, as it is a fanfic under 300 chapters. It's fairly well written and flows without too many outstanding logic flaws.
First up: I like the story, but holy Sh*t, dat writing quality(lack of better words). the use of male/female indicators like he/she or him/her are so incoherent that around half the story i came to the conclusion that the Translator must have thrown a dice to decide if the Character is male or female... in that sentence. meaning that in one paragraph the gender of one character(for example the main) can change around 5-10 times! Also there are often words or even entire parts of a Sentence simply missing which makes many sentences open to personall interpretation. Or your just left with the feeling of"What the Heck is written there??". TL;DR Storys good, the writing of the translator.... well not so.
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Its a great story. The grammar is barely readable. How about getting an editor?? Thanks for the good read. Don't drop this π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§
Bleach: Secret Intentions is a really good fan-fiction novel with normal main character who doesn't start with some extraordinary powers except his knowledge from past life. It's a standard story from going weakest to the strong. No harem as it happens with other stories on this website, just strong friendships with deep bonds and relationships. Interesting to see how the main character with no OP powers, but with training and deep knowledge is going to fight against Aizen .