Reviews of Cheater revenge system
Cheater revenge system
kimbroken
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Don't blame me for being harsh, but this was unbearable to read. I feel as if the author was going the right places and had the right ideas, but was not able to fully express them properly in a way the reader can enjoy. Grammar was really difficult to understand. And not just small gramatical errors such as full stops or the occasional misspellings, what I'm talking about are disjointed sentences, proper pronouns with no capital letters, messy and unorganised structure and etc. This entire thing was just really hard to stomach. The idea was so interesting and I would have really loved to read it but I could not get past the first few chapters. The characterisation was also not consistent, and the world's were not engaging at all. Good effort but bad execution.
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Author can I have a word with you? Overall the story is good but then I notice a few mistakes (no scratch that there's so many mistakes) in grammar, when using the proper way of big and small letters ( I notice that when you're writing a name sometimes it's written like this Hong yue it should be Hong Yue and other names that I forgot to mention π well I know you know this but maybe you forgot to re-read your story, well its in the first few chapters of the story so might as well revise it. Also the i'm and i should be like this I'm and I) and the first few chapters I notice that some of the words are shortened when in fact it MUST be not cause it will just make the other people want to drop the story, sorry no offense just stating the fact. I write this review of mine not to make you feel discouraged and to make you feel that your not doing your best and what not. I write this review because I really like the story and I wanted it to be further enhanced cause I know with those little mistakes repaired this story will be able to take leaps and bounds to success. Please no hate π I just wanted to help ππ Overall the story is great ππ
I read the summary of the story and liked it. Author, you are a great writer. I was laughing from the first arc to the second arc. I will not criticize your writing. My brain and eyes will still read it. I hope and wish for you to continue writing this story, characters, and the system more. Go Author-san! You got this! I am now your fan! d^_^b
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Most of the stars is at a three due to stability update and writing quality. The story development is quite fast-paced, not because it is a system novel/quick transmigration, but the author is not all for a long, drawn-out arc (I think this is the novel, if I'm wrong...whoops π ). So if you're looking for a quick read, then you can try this novel. The only downside is that the chapters have many grammar mistakes. Unedited, but the author is trying their best to edit it by going back to fix it. It's not 100% perfect, there's still errors even in the edited ones, but the author is trying. Points for effort right? You can still understand the gist of what's going on. What else? What else? Character design...eh, she's been cheated on, so she's pretty hurt about that. Most of the arcs are focusing on face slapping those cheating scums. Hence the title~ Updates are slow due to the author being busy, so nothing more to say about that. Give the novel a try~ β( ο½₯γ ο½₯)Ω ΜΜ Take care.