Review Detail of winimar in Cheater revenge system

Don't blame me for being harsh, but this was unbearable to read. I feel as if the author was going the right places and had the right ideas, but was not able to fully express them properly in a way the reader can enjoy. Grammar was really difficult to understand. And not just small gramatical errors such as full stops or the occasional misspellings, what I'm talking about are disjointed sentences, proper pronouns with no capital letters, messy and unorganised structure and etc. This entire thing was just really hard to stomach. The idea was so interesting and I would have really loved to read it but I could not get past the first few chapters. The characterisation was also not consistent, and the world's were not engaging at all. Good effort but bad execution.